You're learning, hopefully (and I know that may sound snotty) that producing neat wiring is not that easy. Well...it is when you've done it ten times. usually not before.
I myself don't think you'll have any technical (eg; hum) issue with the way it is. But I WOULD try to cut 3/4"-1" out of each of the right hand loops.
One problem as I see it is that your "split" point, the point where the twisted pair coming from the left, feeding the tube, and the "output" pair, feeding the downstream tube make their turn is different for each tube. It is not uniform. I believe you could get a better look if you tried to make the split point uniform...and it could be 7 o'clock, 6 o'clock, or 5 o'clock relative to any tube. But: All the same.
And, I would focus less on twisting the input & output wires-to-the-pin together once they make the turn. One of the conundrums is, if you twist several feet of wire in a twist drill to make your complete filament string, then cut that long length up, when you go to unwind the individual wires to make the connections per-tube, the wire is usually coiled up to an extent that you can't really uncoil it well. You can see this on the last tube in your chain. The single wires look "twisty". The individual wires taken out of the twisted pair will still show curviness and it is hard to get out. What's funny, is if you go to Google Images and look up "filament wiring" you'll get about 8 different techniques. Some of this is personal style. I like (without claiming this is any kind of "standard") to have the "Main line" twisted and when the indiv wires make the turn, they are untwisted but very coherent with each other. Like on Sluckey's pix on the orig thread. (Except he did not twist his "main line". But the indiv wires going to the tube....I like to see those so on top of each other with the same curvature, that they look like only one wire. >>IT'S NOT EASY TO DO THIS laid against the chassis! It's MUCH easier to produce a cleaner looking string wiring it "fender-style, "up in the air".<<
Anyway, to get that look, you pretty much have to cut & strip the two individual wires going to each pin at the same time. It helps to handle everything less. Untwist less, bend less.
Keep at it. I absolutely promise you, the first 20 things I built looked sketchy. I applaud your willingness to accept constructive critique.