Update and Questions:
So, I got some new IRF820s and better mounting hardware, and reconfigured things as a single MOSFET oscillator, and got that working... but it's weak and thumpy. So I added the follower, and modded a few things to get it to reach nearly full depth without thumping, resulting in the new trem schematic, shown at bottom of the full schematic attached.
The audio coming through the trem'ed driver triode sounds good, but at about 70% to 100% full trem depth I'm still getting clicking sounds in synch with the trem frequency, at a constant volume regardless of the MV setting on that channel. Quiet enough to disappear at higher playing volumes, but just audible when guitar is muted or with quiet playing.
The trem signal/wave itself looks nice and smooth.
The voltage at the driver cathode registers 2.4v to 2.9v with trem at full depth, and 1.3v at zero depth, so it seems the trem is shifting the bias in addition to modulating it. I *think* I used a lower value R on this triode specifically to compensate for that upward voltage shift I noticed in the circuit model. When I subbed in a 800 ohm resistor for the 1.2k that is there, that diminished the click (and everything) but didn't remove it.
10 second audio/video sample here:
https://photos.app.goo.gl/9q4BKon57kELyXc99Am I fighting a trem design (cathode wiggler) that is just going to have this problem, or do we think there is a solution to the click noise somewhere?
If I can't solve it I'll try to implement a version of the Trem-o-nator, but early design scribblings made me wonder whether it would load down the already pretty low signal too much... and I really like the sound of the bias trem.