I thought the same myself originally...my first attempt at inserting the Trem-O-Nator was exactly as you describe...250k pot and at the treble pot wiper. Just resulted in large signal loss as I increased the tremolo intensity. That's what kick-started the experimentation. I tried a 500k pot. No improvement.
Anyway, I think I've cracked it! Last night I removed both wires from the intensity pot to the vactrol and tested the amp. No problems at all, so I know the amp and the oscillator are both working fine in isolation. So today I examined my audio path insertion connection, and realised the turret I'd used was actually connected under the board to the V2a cathode - doh! So I corrected that and berated myself for missing it the first time. I also moved the HT supply to node B, rather than node D, and it's ground to point 2 in order to separate it from the rest of the preamp HT nodes and grounds.
Tried firing it all up, and bingo! Everything worked well, and sounded great. Signal volume loss / imbalance issues look to be sorted...trem sounds lush...so I tried a 250K B pot, but that didn't work well here. Basically the trem only appeared towards the very end of the turn, so very little range of control in the full sweep of the pot. Not mmuch better with a 250k A for comparison. Both were wired as a variable resistor. Switched back to my 50k log pot and that just seems to work nicely in this position/configuration. Much better balance between trem on and trem off signal, good range of control in the pot sweep (mostly the second half of the turn...might try a 50K linear at some point...or a 100k...don't have any to hand), and none of the almost volume pot type behaviour I'd experienced the first time I'd experimented with adding this trem circuit.
So, updated schematic attached showing what's worked for me.