Preamp 1, all the knobs work but it seems way to bright, almost fingers on chalkboard bright. To get to what I think is close, I have to set treble to min, bass and mid to max.
Remove the 39pF cap across your 2.2MΩ. That boosts things above ~1.86kHz (the -3dB point of 39pF and 2.2MΩ) while the 82pF cap is rolling off starting about 5.9kHz (the -3dB point of 82pF and 330kΩ). That's a nice big presence peak you may not want (Mesa had a graphic EQ after all this to tailor things if you wanted, which you don't have).
Or just remove the 39pF and the 82pF caps (cause you still would have the 5.9kHz rolloff which will compound the natural rolloff of the speaker at/above that frequency).
What do the 8.1M/.002uf (10M on original), do? I’m guessing a band pass filter?
They don't do anything. The 250pF cap bypasses them almost completely.
The 250pF cap doesn't look like 8.1MΩ (to evenly split signal between the resistor/cap and the 250pF) until the signal frequency is down to 78.6Hz. But at 78.6Hz, the 0.022uF cap looks like a bit over 1MΩ (so that total path is over 9MΩ). Any signal that low has already taken the path of least resistance through the 150kΩ resistor to the caps connected to the Bass and Mid pots.
The schematic is about a direct copy of a mesa formula pre section.
That explains it. You copied parts values, but didn't copy the
relays for switching. The 0.002uF and 10MΩ do nothing until the relay shorts out the 10MΩ. At that point, the 0.002uF cap bypasses the 250pF and shifts the response of the Treble pot downward. So it acts like a mid boost
with the 10MΩ shorted.
... the 2.7K resistor between the treble & bass pots. ...
I don't think this part does much of anything either.
In a Fender tonestack, the Bass pot varies from 250kΩ (max bass) to 0Ω (minimum bass). Here, the Bass pot varies from 252.7kΩ (max bass) to 2.7kΩ, which is kinda like the Fender Bass pot just a hair above 0.