As per my schem I can only get it to 2 on the intensity dial before its starts to thump.
Do you have enough intensity with the dial set on 2? If so, set the int. pot full CW and increase the 1M resistor on V3 pin 1 to prevent thumping. Adding some filter caps on the trem signal will help too. I'm not very optimistic about this suggestion.
Here's an explanation of the components you asked about...
A... sets the fast end of the trem speed. Your circuit has this also but it's on top of the speed pot.
B... sets the low end of the trem speed. I needed this to prevent oscillator drop out when the slow switch is engaged.
C... filter cap to help keep the trem signal looking like a smooth sine wave.
D... P/O voltage divider to knock down the level of the trem signal. Also provides isolation between oscillator and intensity control. Your circuit has this also.
E... DC blocking cap. Your circuit has this also.
F... Another filter. Same as C.
G... Mixing resistor used to combine the trem and guitar signals.
H... Eye candy. Increases the amplitude of the trem signal considerably. Not really needed in this application.
I don't think you'll have much luck eliminating the thumping by doing anything to the oscillator circuit (unless the 1M trick fixes it). The thump needs to be dealt with after the trem is combined with the guitar signal. Your amp has a filter network on the plate of V2A that is supposed to remove the trem signal. Vox uses a much better filter. Look in the upper right hand corner on page 3 of this pdf...
http://home.comcast.net/~seluckey/amps/VAC15/Vox_AC15.pdfThe Vox and "Hoffman" circuit both use a push/pull modulator that cancels most of the trem signal due to common mode rejection. Vox applies that filter after the modulator to futher insure the trem signal disappears. But your circuit uses a single ended modulator so it must rely on the filter alone to remove the trem signal. You could try that Vox filter and see if that gets rid of the thumping.
Are you wanting to make this circuit work better? Or, are you open to trying bias modulation on the power tubes?