Hoffman's schematic/layout uses 4 12A_7's (with an unused triode) and yours is using 3 12A_7's.
His layout will work fine for you & the Hoffman style layouts are very quiet and well thought out. And he has the fixed bias values worked out for you.
Having said that, I want to draw your attention to something. The mixing resistor on a typical Fender reverb is 3.3M/10p with a 100k reverb pot vs. on the one tube reverb where the mixing resistor is typically more like 150k-220k range with a reverb pot of 1M to 2.2M .
So, IF you use the typical 150k-220k one tube reverb mixing resistor, then note that your attentuation in the signal chain is less. In other words, that 3rd triode gain stage is getting more signal from the previous stage and you will possibly loose some more headroom (which is sometimes already a complaint on Princeton Reverbs). You may wish to stay with the typical Fender 3.3M/10p mixing resistor when using the 1 tube reverb? I have never tried that myself so I am not certain how that will sound?
One way to lessen mud and too much a woofy tone is to lower the 22uf cathode caps to 4.7uf & lower the .1 post phase invertor caps to .047.
Just a thought for you to ponder. With respect, Tubenit