Of course, keep your parallel input and you could make a parallel reverb recovery stage also like your input stage. Or you could also use a single tube to drive the reverb tank AND the return using a single 12DW7. 12DW7 is half-12au7 and half-12ax7. Keeping the circuit the same exept a bias resistor of 1k for the ½ 12au7 driver section with the same 22k transformer, 300 V B+ not like 425 or someting.
Forget the master volume story if you don't want one really... I don't like them either. All is ok for the Dwell pot, absolutely nothing wrong with it. I was basically babbling about the dwell meg pot being more effective to tame the drive, not to augment it like its implementation in the Fender stand alone reverb unit. In the case of your amp, you set the dwell at maximum when using low amplifier volume and you set the mixer control instead. As you get near max on the amplifier's volume, the preamp send a very strong dry signal to the driver tube which might distort or overcrash the reverb. A condition that doesn't usually occur in the fender stand alone unit because the drive signal is independent on volume, and unless you run it with 20% higher B+ or insert an EL34 in it, the pan won't usually sound overdriven.
So, basically what I was saying is, in your amp, at high volume (or high gain with a master), reverb distortion is going to be cleaned-up by the dwell control and could be very utile in that matter and less so, if the amp is played always clean as fender intended (and that's probably why it was omitted on the onboard reverb amps where your reverb circuit was derived from.