... Exact copy of many Marshall second stages. ... first stage. Stolen from Marshall.
3rd/4th stages Marshall stole from Fender Bassman. ...
... the sound they were going for.....or the circuit(s) they were Cloning/Using. ...
From a quick glance this appears to be a copy of the Marshall JCM800, right down to the use of the two input jacks to select whether there is an additional preamp gain stage.
... My friends complaint is too much "brightness". ...
You really ought to see/listen to your friend playing the amp and showing you what he doesn't like.
Blackface Fender amps have a pleasing full-frequency sound which is warm and full at low-ish volumes. But they can get flubby or farty when you dime the volume.
Marshall stole the tweed Bassman circuit, but didn't stay there. Over time and as players pushed for more distortion, they sheared away bass in the preamp to keep the distorted sound from flubbing out.
If your friend is complaining about brightness, but mainly when turning the gain control low for a clean sound, then 2deaf is spot-on pointing at C4. Bright caps like this sound best (for my taste) between min/max volume and closer to the latter for just a "little more bright". They have no effect when that pot is dimed, and will be excessively bright when the pot is near minimum.
But you also have to consider that this amp was built almost exclusively for a distortion sound; everything is tilted to optimize the amp for that purpose. He may need an EQ pedal or a different amp for a really good clean sound...