Your first build looks a lot like my first build, which I ended up almost re-doing to get it working. This is only what *I personally* would do,
*if it were me*. I'd disconnect all wires going to your tube sockets, all of them. Rotate your 8 pin sockets so both keyways are going the same way, as 11teen points out. It will only be confusing to you and anyone else when taking voltages, troubleshooting, etc.
Make sure all your 9 pin sockets are facing the same way also. If possible, orientate them so that each "side" of the socket is on either "side" of the 4/5 and 9 pins. This helps you keep the 1,2,3 pin wires together and the 6.7.8 pin wires together. Makes it easier for neat wiring and not burning the insulation with your soldering iron.
Then, re-do your heating wiring. Arguably, this is the most important part of wiring the amp. Also, the biggest pain in the ass

I've started using solid core instead of stranded wire for it, in 20 gauge coming off the power tube sockets.I don't bother twisting anymore, just keep the 2 wires paralleled and pay attention to keeping your signal wires (anything going to a grid) away from them. If you want to twist them, that's fine too; twisting once is not going to break 'em.
THEN, re-attach your board wires to the socket. Double check against the schematic for each connection as you make it. Don't make my mistake and try to get it all done in a certain time. I have FINALLY learned to act as if each solder joint is the only thing I'm going to do that evening. And I'm still not close to Sluckey quality (his work is unbelievable) but I'm way better than I used to be. You can use 22 ga. solid core wire for all those connections. Using different color wires for each thing (cathode, plate, grid) helps with trouble shooting too.
I'm only suggesting re-doing the wiring because I really think it's going to be much harder to figure out what's wrong without doing that. Again, this is only my opinion formed by me just having to rip stuff out and re-do it to get it right.
Soldering iron: I've got a Weller cheapie that works great
http://www.all-spec.com/UserFiles/Images/Products/weller-12200_wps18mp_DV_WebXL.jpg Be sure to always wipe the tip on a damp sponge before each joint, and like 11teen says, a little dab of flux makes it even easier. Should only take a few seconds for the solder to flow into the joint.
Take your time, make every joint count, and have fun! I could have bought quite a few amps with the inventory I've accumulated, but that ain't no fun!!