... the reverb needs some work because its there but also seems a bit quiet even on full bore ...
I won't try to second-guess your 12DW7 (?) Reverb circuit.
But check out the 220kΩ mixing resistors right before the words "to phase inverter." Those appear to mix your Dry and Reverb signals, right? 220kΩ & 220kΩ is 50/50 balance of Dry to Reverb.
Look at the
Deluxe Reverb. While reality is a little more involved, Fender's plan for mixing was 3.3MΩ from the Dry path (to a grid of V4), and 470kΩ from the Reverb path (found at the output of the Reverb pot, and right beside the 3.3MΩ on the layout).
These are voltage divider circuits:
Dry: 470kΩ / (3300kΩ + 470kΩ) = ~12.5%
Reverb: 3300kΩ / (3300kΩ + 470kΩ) = ~87.5%
So before anything else, you've "turned down" your reverb compared to Fender.
If you've also "wired the Reverb pot backwards" as-drawn (input on the wiper, output from the non-grounded end of the track), that will further reduce the Reverb signal and increase the Dry signal.
So, make sure the Reverb pot is wired right-way around with the output on the wiper, and make your resistor from the Dry path at least 1-3MΩ (after which you can consider whether the Reverb path needs a 470kΩ in place of the 220kΩ).