In that case, I'd be suspect of the signal split at the vibrato channel volume wiper. You might do better to take the signal off the plate of the following triode.
I am curious what the problem is with tying the grids of V2B and V4A together. Others have expressed suspicion of that as well. I don't believe there's a loading issue, though the Volume curve might dip a hair. Here are some alternatives:
• If Dwell were a 1M-A with a 110K stop, preceded by a 500p cap (instead of 2n2), then I could feed said cap with V2B directly, and V4A could be eliminated altogether. My issue is noise. The resultant maximum source impedance into V3 would be something like 278KΩ, whereas V3 sees a maximum source impedance of something like 70KΩ as drawn.
• If I couple into the V4A grid off of the V2B plate (as I believe you're suggesting), I get excess gain into V3 via the Dwell control. But along those lines, I could set up V4A as a cathode follower, where the plate of V2B feeds the grid of V4A, V4A cathode is held 100K above ground, and V4A cathode feeds Dwell as drawn. It's still an extra stage in the chain, and a cathode follower doesn't quite align with the Fender design approach of the era. But it would work.
• If all three connections to V2B and V4B were swapped, I could run V4A and V4B in parallel (like V3) to do the job that V2B does now, and the resultant current could easily drive both the mix resistor load and the Dwell control as drawn, without undue level loss due to loading. Sort of a distribution amplifier approach.
The mixing wet/dry circuit could work, but you already have independent volume control. To minimize potential channel interaction you can forgo this entirely and just take the reverb eq recovery out to the unused PI input. No mixing resistors or pots needed. Lower resistor noise.
Well, that pot at the grid of V4B is a temporary trimmer. Its point is fine balance, then you adjust the 120K resistors to match whatever balance you like. I'm not sure I understand the suggestion -- are you talking about joining the plates of V1B and V2B directly? The reason for keeping the mix resistors and V4B in there is twofold: the heavy loading of joining those plates together, and the further loading of the Intensity pot. Even if I swap the 50K-RA for a 100K-L, there's a bunch of attenuation (and that's in the original circuit too). If V4B feeds just the Intensity pot in parallel with the P.I., it's a pretty reasonable load.
I'm also a bit unsure of what the function of the line in is. To potentially use the amp as an outboard spring reverb unit?
You got it.