@Willabe, tubeswell, stratomaster,
A lot of great advice here, thank you. Some small changes, some bigger. I think I understand the mixing area better now, how the pieces interact. I hadn't really looked at that 220K grid blocker before but I will now.
@HBP,
Even with the Intensity at 10, the reverb was certainly weaker than Fender BF amps, and muddier. I agree that the mixing was maybe not right. Thanks for explaining how to alter the mix resistors, that confirmed my own guess.
So, start small: stratomaster's suggestion to reduce the reverb input cap sounded good. I dropped it to 470pf. Someone I read here recently (HBP?) said how they have used cathode bypass caps for tone shaping. So I got wild and crazy and changed the driver's cathode cap from 25uf down to 4.7uf.
Of course, changing the caps lowers the reverb bass frequencies' gain but that's inescapable I guess.
Bingo! Big change--those two new caps cleaned up the bass muddiness and brought the reverb to life. At full intensity the reverb is lush and full. No mud, even when I increase the Bass control.
Overall, I like this 12DW7 reverb. I never built one with the long tank before. The sound is very Fenderish now. The 1M Intensity pot works smoothly over the whole range. Turning it up leads to a brighter sound, dialing it drops the tone back to more midrange. The amp generates a smooth harmonic overdrive at higher volumes. I can certainly recommend the circuit using these new values. The 470K/470K mixing resistors I left alone for now. I'm pretty happy with it now.
Posting an updated schematic.
Thanks for all the help.