Just remember... a layout and a schematic are different things. I used to work mainly from layouts when I first started, but you should get very comfortable with a schematic as well. Once you can read them with ease, you will see possible trouble spots more quickly than when using a layout.
Also, what's the tube numbering system-- Is V1 always the preamp, etc. The layout and schematic give them by their id (5y3gt, etc.)
Unfortunately, it's never "always" anything. Most often, V1 is the tube closest to the input jack. On your layout, that is the 12AX7 farthest to the right. But unless the schematic or layout have part designators like this, along with the actual tube type, there's always the chance for confusion.
There's no bypass cap between the intensity control and any tube.
The bypass cap is there, I just didn't do a good job of pointing you to it.
Look at the layout you just posted. Above the 2nd 12AX7 (the one closest to the 6V6), there is shown a 10uF cap in parallel with a 1.5k resistor. A yellow wire is shown running from the right lug of the intensity pot to the end of the resistor/cap which also has a wire running to the input 12AX7 (the one on the right) at pin 8. In your picture, that appears to be a white wire. Unsolder 1 leg of the electrolytic cap that is at this eyelet. Your trem might start working.
Also at this same eyelet, the picture makes it look like the 0.022uF orange drop is in the eyelet for the side of the 1.5k resistor going to pin 8 of the first 12AX7, instead of to the eyelet that's 1 to the right, which has a leg of a 100k resistor. Is that right, or is it an optical illusion? If it is the case, the 0.022 cap has a leg in the wrong spot.