It seems to be breaking up rather early.
The NFB would be something that contributes to that.
Usually I try to follow the build design exactly at first to know that things sound as they should.
Then I will apply a mod and be able to know how that mod changed the sound.
If you make a number of mods to the original circuit at first,
you risk not knowing how those mods are actually changing the sound,
or if the mods are interacting and creating problems.
I usually try to build as designed first, then apply and tweak a single mod to taste.
Then apply another mod, one at a time, making sure that any additional mod doesn't create problems.

If you go through that process and apply a number of mods tweaked to your taste that makes it sound best to you.
Then I don't really consider that to be the original design with a bunch of mods applied.
I consider that to be a re-design of the circuit, and your own original design.

Now if you want to build another amp exactly like that,
you are then following your own original design, and know exactly what it should sound like if built correctly.
Just because someone says this or that mod makes it sound better,
I really want to know if I like the sound of the original design, or the mod better.
I might not think the mod improves the sound like they do.
Or I might like the mod for a certain sound, but not how it changes the overall characteristics of the amp.
Most of the original designs we copy have proven to perform well overall.
Even things that don't seem to be much of a change, can negatively effect the amps overall performance.
